Workshop Blog Post (1)

The top three insights about writing I got from the workshop today were the importance of the speaker, nuanced language, and imagery. During our workshop conversation, many of the speakers in the poems we analyzed were quite confusing, because the author didn’t provide enough detail on who was speaking. This often made the entire poem confusing because we didn’t know the point of view. Next, I realized how important nuanced language is in poetry and writing, because one word can have many different connotations. Sometimes, these connotations are implied, but sometimes it can be a mistake, so you have to make sure to use purposeful words while writing because it can be analyzed the wrong way. Finally, I noticed how vivid imagery in poetry added a deeper level for the reader to observe, because along with the tone shifts and emotions from the poem, the reader can now visualize the setting and the subject. Vivid imagery makes the poem more interesting and engaging for the audience. One thing I can do differently to make workshop more meaningful is ask more questions. I feel like our conversation was basically everyone voicing their opinions on the poem, but we didn’t really build off of each others’s ideas. Our conversation wasn’t very engaging, therefore if I ask more questions, people can actually converse with each other by agreeing or disagreeing while trying to answer the question.

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